Oh oh oh I'm not sure how I missed this. I love it. You do a great job of getting in their heads. And oohhh kisses for Brass.
Letting his gaze go to the two men, he leaned close to her ear and said, “How about dinner tomorrow night?” This line is brilliant. I don't know if it's because he's watching the other two detectives as he says it, but I loved it.
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Date: 2006-07-25 01:58 am (UTC)Letting his gaze go to the two men, he leaned close to her ear and said, “How about dinner tomorrow night?”
This line is brilliant. I don't know if it's because he's watching the other two detectives as he says it, but I loved it.