Since I'm not a writer, I can't do this one, but I will comment on your writing. "Lightning Strikes Twice" is one of my favorite Voyage fics. When I first read it, I was so excited to think that Voyage was going to have such a creative and great writer. I think you were the first writer I gave a feedback to. That was a good move on my part because I got to know you. Every Voyage story you have written was top notch. Now, CSI has got you and I'm glad that you are a Brass fan, so he gets your talents. I don't know if I can say if you have gotten better, because I thought you were pretty darn good when you started. Just keep writing and I'll just keep enjoying and once in a while, I'll whine a little bit, in hopes that I can get you to finish a Voyage story.

I swear that Bunchofgrapes did not pay me to write this! LOL.

N.